My persuasive argument thesis is: Although computers are developed, computers cannot take places of teachers.
1. What do people already know about my topic?
2. What research has already been done about my topic?
If people ignore me, the government will continue the introduction of computers in education, and the efficiency of education will decreased. Students will be confused of new method of education. So the government will find another fundamental education methods to students.
http://vault.smarttech.com/videos/classroomtour/index.html the example of using computers in education with the name 'smart classroom'.
http://www.csus.edu/irt/faq/classrooms/Classroom-Services/index.html#What-is-a-Smart-Classroom explanations about what smart classrooms are.
http://www.debate.org/opinions/should-computer-replace-teachers This is a debate with the topic 'Should computers replace teachers?' There are con and pro sides.
3. What are the implications of my argument (What if I'm right? What if I'm right and people ignore me?)
If people ignore me, the government will continue the introduction of computers in education, and the efficiency of education will decreased. Students will be confused of new method of education. So the government will find another fundamental education methods to students.
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My Narration
We are live in the world that computers conquer. Already computers have taken place of many parts of humans. As the computers are developed, many movies related to humans and computers have made these days. For example, a movie 'HER' is a movie that describes love between artificial intelligence(a computer) and human. Today, many people have become individualists. The main character felt all alone in the world. One day, he fell in love with the artificial intelligence. Can the artificial intelligence really have emotions that humans feel like love? Like this movie, computers are the things that cannot be separated.
However, although the developed computers have changed the society a lot, there is few change in education environment. 3 components of education are professor, learner, and contents to learn. The Korea's education is just that professors teach learners the contents. Especially in Korea, the cramming education is in effect in the most of schools. However, nowadays, 'smart classroom' such as tablet PC, smartphone have introduced in education environments and it makes some changes in the Korea's education environments. Before this change, students just watched internet lecture, however, now students learn with various education method of computers. As the computers have introduced into education environments, various companies such as Apple, Samsung, Google have tried to make various computer textbooks.
However, we have to be very careful because this is very new change in the education environments. It is not identified education as a good method to students. Also, students have to be careful to accept the new education way.
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